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Low water at Skerry

Chapter One

The lamp room

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{{when: 14 March 1988}}

Maren climbed the stairs the way her father had, counting. Ninety-one steps, and the ninety-first always seemed to come late.

The lamp room was smaller than the stories. A brass burner, a cracked leather stool, a ledger in her father’s hand with the last line unfinished.

By dark she had learned the wick.

ch. 1 · 53 words

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Low water at Skerry
Part one: The island8 chapters · 17,250 words
  1. 1The lamp room (done)Maren · 2,140 · done
  2. 2Wick and paraffin (revised)Maren · 1,880 · revised
  3. 3Ida’s ledger (revised)Ida · 2,310 · revised
  4. 4The relief boat (drafted)Tobias · 2,020
  5. 5Nets (drafted)Maren · 1,760
  6. 6A letter from Hollin (drafted)Tobias · 2,450
  7. 7Fog signal (drafted)Maren · 2,090
  8. 8The Aurelia comes in (drafted)Maren · 2,600
Part two: The mainland8 chapters · 15,150 words
  1. 9What the keeper kept (drafted)Ida · 1,950
  2. 10Leaving Skerry (drafted)Maren · 2,270
  3. 11Hollin harbour (to write)Maren · 0
  4. 12Rooms over the chandler’s (drafted)Maren · 1,990
  5. 13The school on the hill (drafted)Maren · 2,330
  6. 14The ferry at Hollin (drafted)Tobias · 2,060
  7. 15Market day (drafted)Maren · 1,840
  8. 16The inquiry (drafted)Maren · 2,710
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Low water at Skerry

Chapter Seven

Fog signal

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{{when: 25 March 1988}}

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  1. 1The lamp room
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  7. 7Fog signal
  8. 8The Aurelia comes in
  9. 9What the keeper kept
  10. 10Leaving Skerry
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Maren climbed the stairs the way her father had, counting. She heard the wind find the gallery door and felt the whole tower lean into it, a slow and patient lean, and she noticed that her hands had gone to the rail before she told them to.

“You’ll want to keep the glass clean,” Ida whispered from the stair below, as if the lamp might hear her.

“I know,” Maren hissed. She did not know.

The room held a brass burner, a cracked leather stool, a ledger with her father’s hand on every line and the last line unfinished, and over all of it the great lens, which gathered the small light and made of it something that could be seen from the Hollin shore on a clear night, if anyone on the shore had been looking.

She wiped the glass. She wiped it again. The glass was clean, and she saw that she was still wiping it.

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Chapter One

The lamp room

Maren climbed the stairs the way her father had, counting. Ninety-one steps, and the ninety-first always seemed to come late. She heard the wind find the gallery door and felt the whole tower lean into it, a slow and patient lean, and she noticed that her hands had gone to the rail before she told them to.

“You’ll want to keep the glass clean,” Ida whispered from the stair below, as if the lamp might hear her.

“I know,” Maren said. She did not know. She had seen it done once, from the bottom of the tower, at the age of nine, with the whole of a long grey afternoon between her and any understanding of how a lamp is kept.

The lamp room was smaller than the stories. There was a brass burner, a cracked leather stool, a ledger in her father’s hand with the last line unfinished, and over all of it the great lens, which held the room’s small light and made of it something that could be seen from the Hollin shore on a clear night, if anyone on the Hollin shore had been looking, which she suspected no one ever was.

She wiped the glass. She wiped it again. The glass was clean, and she was still wiping it.

* * *

By dark she had learned the wick. It wanted trimming to the width of a fingernail, no more, and her father’s scissors, which hung on a nail by the door, had been sharpened so many times they had gone narrow and quick like something alive. Ida stood behind her and said nothing, which was how Maren knew she was being watched properly.

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Low Water at Skerry

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Anna Halloran

Halloran / LOW WATER AT SKERRY / 12

Maren climbed the stairs the way her father had, counting. Ninety-one steps, and the ninety-first always seemed to come late.

The lamp room was smaller than the stories.

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